The bar chart illustrates the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender for the . There are two bars per region representing the percentage of illiterate male or females.
South Asia has the rate of illiteracy compared to the other regions, consisting of 35% male and 56% female approximately. Other areas such as Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa have illiterate in double and triple times in amount and Oceania .
Women have higher illiteracy rates than men in all regions, these figures as twice as high as men. In places such as Arab, Africa and South Asia we can that the majority of women being unable to read or write.
On the other hand, countries such as Oceania and Caribbean have lower levels of illiteracy, consisting of 10 to 20 percentage of individuals being not able to read or write. have the least figures with quantities of literate men and women.
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seeOn the other hand, countries such as Oceania and Caribbean have lower levels of illiteracy, consisting of 10 to 20 percentage of individuals being not able to read or write.
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