Bicycles
On the one hand, members of society think that people who commute to work by bicycle receive innumerable benefits and I . people to stay fit and healthy. This is owing to the fact that, cycling is great low-impact exercise that enables people to manage weight. that cycling to work of developing cancer and heart disease. Another reason for a attitude towards cycling is it people to their transportation expenses as they don’t pay for gas, insurance or parking.
a injured or even killed in accidents caused by unpredictable and life-threatening road hazards.
for the reason that it is the most cost-effective method to ensure their physical health and well-being.
are considered
as an efficient means of transport by a number of people while others believe that bicycles cause more troubles to the community. In my opinion, I consider that cycling is essential in our everyday life to maintain a healthy quality of life.On the one hand,
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complication to the existing traffic issues in the urban areas. One major concern is that bicycles are not as quick as motor vehicles. Consequently
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Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement