proportion of population aged 65 years and over

Proportion of population aged 65 years and over


Proportion of population aged 65 years and over
The presented graph
shows
the population proportion of elderly
people
.

There are three
different
countries of which this graph
is compared
.

Looking at the graph, USA and Sweden
opulation
of the elderly
people


was fluctuating.
But
when we look at the Japan's population, it
was


the least of all other countries and it will
drastically
increase in

the
near future.

Analysing
the data, USA and Sweden
started
approximately between 5%

and 10% and had a same general path along approximately in 1990

increasing
the proportion to 15% and approximately 14%
respectively
.

On the other hand
Japan had a fall from 5% to almost 2% between the

years 1940 to 1990 approximately.

After 1990, Japan had a respectable climb in elderly citizens around

5% in 2000, and in the near future it can have a drastic climb about

20% making it to 25% and will be the highest in elderly population

if compared to USA and Sweden. USA had a fall in 2000 which
is


almost
negligible and it can
also
climb with a
less steeper
increase

(around 23%). And
finally
Sweden has a fluctuating pattern
which


climbed after 2000 to 20%, again will
decreased
to 17% approximately

and then it will climb it to
make
the second highest in these three

countries
.

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