The bar chart illustrates the figures about both genders athletes who attended the Olympic Games from 1924 to 2014 and the line chart below demonstrates the level of involvements in the same period. An that although the highest sports been during this particular time the rate of women participation a remarkable increase,
In 1924, there was the modest females enrolled in the games by almost around 200, under 5000. During the mentioned period, sportsmen began with 3000 players in the field and ended up
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after the year 1984.In 1924, there was the modest females enrolled in the games by almost around 200
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, this trend was followed
by a gradual increase in the number of sportswomen from 200 to merely
less than 2000 between 1954 and 1984. Then the contribution of women jumped almost more than doubled and reach to This words can be replaced with:merely
justnearly
to 6000. As a result
, the sharp acceleration of total attendees were mostly
due to the higher elaboration of females, which rose total players from almost 7000 in 1984 to more than 1000 sports person in 2014.
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