This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
provided This words can be replaced with:beneficial
positiveThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreeThis words can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
beforeis reached
. To This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
beginDid you mean "They are" or "They were"?They areThey were
TheyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :aidassistsupport
helpPossible spelling mistake found.plethoraplat hora
plathoraDid you mean "affects"?affects
affectPossible spelling mistake found.routine
routuneThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thoughtConsequently
, youngster attracted to invent new patterns in human life. For instance
, a survey conduct by associate of university in Indore revealed that Possible spelling mistake found.Prakrit
PrakirtiConsider using a past participle here: "become".become
becameThis expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.non-profitnonprofit
non profitA determiner is probably missing here: "the worst".the worst
worstAs a result
, the future of particular nation would be safe as they are the upcoming generation of the country. To demonstrate, Mother Teresa who understand the situation of poor people in their younger age which give birth of humble and kind lady who introduced various skill in ourselves.
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