This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
givenThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houseson the contrary
I believe in the long run this freedom can yield deplorable consequences In this contemporary epoch, having more control over the appearance of their building insisted people to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getespecially
, creative people. Consequently
, people can realize the effectiveness of the art along with its values in every walk of life. Moreover
, the area which had built by using creative themes and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideasThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveFor example
, the decorated areas like buildings and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
housesThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buyas well
as for tourist industries. However
, if there are no restrictions on how people can design their homes and offices, there can be possibility that every building is conflict to each other, structurally
. Thus
, there is no sequence in the designing of infrastructure, while a number of buildings are not This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
keptMoreover
, people can not be This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
preventedFor example
, in a number of areas people paint abominable message that can cause violence or harm others feelings. Thus
, deplorable people can promote inappropriate messages through wall paintings. In the light of aforementioned points, I conclude that having control on the designing can promote art and attract tourists. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement