Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to bring attention to the issue of in the college cafeteria.
The cafeteria is one of my favorite places in our college premises and I
to be. There are several issues like the cutlery is not environment in cafeteria.
In order to restore the earlier hygiene standards, I would like to suggest few measures.
I hope and believe following above process will solve the issues and our college cafeteria spick and span again.
Kind Regards,
Robert
I am writing to bring attention to the issue of
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un-hygieneThe cafeteria is one of my favorite places in our college premises and I
really
like spending time there. The quality and variety of food items served are truly
impeccable. Moreover
, they are reasonably
priced.However
, lately it has been observed
that the overall
cafeteria establishment is not as clean as it This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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usedproperly
washed, the floor is dusty, the table surface and table cloth has stains on it, causing Possible spelling mistake found.sanitized
un-sanitizedIn order to restore the earlier hygiene standards, I would like to suggest few measures.
Firstly
, need to create awareness amongst the cafeteria staff about the importance of hygiene and how it affects health negatively
if not well-maintained. Secondly
, establish a cleanliness protocol that This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
mustbe followed
. Conduct weekly or monthly in-person inspection from experts to review adherence to cleanliness guidelines and take appropriate actions.I hope and believe following above process will solve the issues and
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makeKind Regards,
Robert
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