The diagram provides an outline of the stages in generating electricity from water. The process with water in the ocean and ends with power
, the heat of the sun evaporates water in the ocean, and then the water rises and forms into clouds. When it rains, these clouds drop a number their water into a reservoir, which is a large area used to store water. The water is in the reservoir with a dam that can to various places where it
electricity demands in the future.
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with a valve to release water down a hill. When the valve is opened
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