The figure the working process of the solar energy water pump. There are three main components in the workstation like: solar panel, water tank and the underground bore or a well which has huge amount of water.
, the solar panel which dc power from the panel goes
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First of allis located
on the ground level on the pole, The plate with photovoltaic cells is located
directly
towards the sun, consume the solar wave. After that Did you forget something after 'the'?
the,directly
towards the bore pump and the water in to the underground bore is heated
. Then, the bore pump supply the water to tank which is on the ground level. Water is stored
in to the water storage witch is at the ground level and releases to the villages.
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
6.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement