Border . critics argue that it is necessary for country. After of both the parties, opine that it is for between nation,
On the one hand, there culture and religious and without border, types of religious are having mix is why are happening between two individuals for religious. Second factor is that leader is getting responsibility due to area of land and huge amount of public, that border of leader. Third impact is that and regulations are difficult to obey for public due to without border. significant reason is that how control whole word is controlling one
are having one reason is that border of soil. of lucrative leader was getting war for expanding land. border is one of problem of world. While border will , war will be over near the future.
complicated to obey and regulations. not getting war for land. Whole world is becoming
is divided
two countries of lands. Most of the wars was occurring for expanding borders. A number of individuals said that border will be exciting between two countries Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in futureThis words can be replaced with:a number of
SomeConsider using "scrutiny".scrutiny
close scrutinyIs this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
iThis words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importanthence
a plethora of problems is not coming between two countrysides.On the one hand, there
is known
about land by line where is over of the country's extent. First
and foremost is that every nation have This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownThis words can be replaced with:various
differentThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peoplePossible spelling mistake found.thattatTATTGAteattwat
tgatAfter 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the quarrels") or simply say "most quarrels".most of the quarrelsmost quarrels
most of quarrelsThis words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importantThis words can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
bigThis words can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
bigThis words can be replaced with:therefore
sois required
for reducing Possible spelling mistake found.responsibilityresponsibly
responsibityThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rulesThis words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFour
fourThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyPlease add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphleader.leader!leader?leader:leader,leader;
leaderOn the other hand
, in the past, behind of every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "war"?war
warsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:a number of
SomeDid you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
ThereforeThe verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "excite"excite
excitedTo conclude
, without border is This words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rulesDid you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
HoweverThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleIf 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.amarearen
isPlease add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpeaceful.peaceful!peaceful?peaceful:peaceful,peaceful;
peaceful5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
5.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement