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goodThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
ideaThis words can be replaced with:tiny
smallThis words can be replaced with:incorect
wrongThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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givenThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
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getsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :embark on the proccess of
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, they learn how to control their expenses.On the other hand, others think kids become
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Total Band
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Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
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Task Achievement