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Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to

Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some
people think that it is a
good
idea
to give children a
small
amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is
wrong
and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your
own
opinion


Money
given
to children has always been a topic for debate. While a handful of people consider that it is a
good
practice, others think it is incorrect and money
also
gets
wasted. In my opinion, although children tends to spend more on unnecessary things, they
start
learning to manage finance at an early age. This essay with discuss both the notions along with my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs.

On the one hand,
some
people and I believe that Children learn to spend
wisely
. They
usually
think
before
buying items as they have limited money.
For instance
, a recent survey conducted by the students of
Sydenham
college of commerce and economics stated that the majority of the students wait for sale to arrive for their shopping.
Additionally
, it
also
encourages the practice of savings at a young age. Children
mostly
are
seen
saving the money for purchasing their
favourite
product.
Thus
, they learn how to control their expenses.

On the other hand, others think kids become
very
dependent. They
immensely
depend on their parents for money, and do not understand the value of earning it. Another reason linked to the
first
one is that they become lazy and want easy money for spending. To exemplify, according to an article in Mumbai Mirror, about 20 % Indian children are relying on their parents even after
growning
up as adults. The reason for the dependency is they were always
given
pocket money to
use
during their young age.
Hence
, children will not work
hard
for their livelihood
in future
.

In conclusion
, the minority of the people believe that giving money can
make
children dependent and lethargic,
however
I along with others consider it to be
a
ideal way to teach them the art of money management.
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Total Band
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Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
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