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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages.
Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages.
Some
individuals spend most of their time at work and leaving them with
little
time to have fun. I would argue that the benefits of spending most of the time at work outweigh the drawbacks.

On one hand, Working
hard
is a very well-known trend in the work era recently, for it offers the workers an opportunity to become more productive. Flexible employees, who consider working for extra hours,
get
paid a high part-time salary. Which in return
helps
them ameliorate and
improve
their life standard.
Moreover
, working long hours is a project that consists of investing in time wasted by gaining more experience and bigger responsibilities.
For instance
, my friend Natasha, prefers to spend a plethora of hours at work
instead
of wasting her time in the afternoon playing games on the phone and watching movies all night long.
Therefore
, it is very
important
to achieve
plenty
of tasks to can
improve
the professional performance.

On the other hand
, this situation is an
extremely
psychological detriment.
Particularly
, workload can engender myriad of pressure and
stress
, which can be
immensely
harmful and a huge distraction from being
fully
concentrated. To clarify this, a recent research study illustrates the relation between the high level of depression and long working hours.
Hence
,
hard
workers suffer from being
unrelaxed
and
overstressed
.

To conclude
,
a large number of
individuals skip or
barely
have time for leisure activities due to working for long hours. I
highly
agree
that this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.
Even though
it is a challenging issue and it can cause serious problems. It should
be noted
that time investment is very essential, this is why one
must
be spending more time exploring new tasks to learn interesting facts about our professional field.
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