This words can be replaced with:a number of
SomeThis words can be replaced with:tiny
littleOn one hand, Working
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistsassistances
helpsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveMoreover
, working long hours is a project that consists of investing in time wasted by gaining more experience and bigger responsibilities. For instance
, my friend Natasha, prefers to spend a plethora of hours at work instead
of wasting her time in the afternoon playing games on the phone and watching movies all night long. Therefore
, it is very This words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importantThis words can be replaced with:abundance
plentyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveOn the other hand
, this situation is an extremely
psychological detriment. Particularly
, workload can engender myriad of pressure and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stressimmensely
harmful and a huge distraction from being fully
concentrated. To clarify this, a recent research study illustrates the relation between the high level of depression and long working hours. Hence
, This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardPossible spelling mistake found.unrelated
unrelaxedPossible spelling mistake found.over stressed
overstressedTo conclude
, Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number ofbarely
have time for leisure activities due to working for long hours. I highly
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreeEven though
it is a challenging issue and it can cause serious problems. It should be noted
that time investment is very essential, this is why one This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement