This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
todayThis words can be replaced with:earthnaturestaruniversecreation
worldThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meetThis words can be replaced with:earthnaturestaruniversecreation
worldeasily
them thanks to technological developments, small businesses are not as more comprehensive and organized as big corporations.This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of allThis words can be replaced with:earthnaturestaruniversecreation
worldThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
moveThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
addThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
useTherefore
, people around the This words can be replaced with:earthnaturestaruniversecreation
worldThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
time-saving and easily
manage their work. Moreover
, these companies may This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :aidassistsupport
helpThis words can be replaced with:various
differentThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleOn the other hand
, despite advantages, there are This words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words can be replaced with:tiny
littleThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expectedThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someas well
. This can affect the efforts of workers. In addition
, customers want to be happy every time. If corporations do not satisfy the customers, then this can lead to losing them and unstable economic conditions.In conclusion
, in the present time, small business grows up in order to reach much more people and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improvesThis words can be replaced with:earthnaturestaruniversecreation
world6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement