The two maps give information about how was the accessibility of roads in the years 2007 and 2010. city hospital.
In the 2007, the city hospital ring road in the center of the map and there was a hospital road between a car park and a bus . The hospital road had joint with the city road on the south side.
In 2010, the city hospital was the same place the public park was to the north-east and connected with the Ring Road. There towards the west side, whereas the car park for staff wasnot expanded.
, there were a few in the center, such as the public car park had and two Roundabouthad connected with hospital road and atty road.
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