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makeas well
.To
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beginThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have toFor example
, significant events like World Cup Football or Olympics have numerous sponsors. These companies take care of This words can be replaced with:abundance
plentycommercially
successful. In addition
, sponsorship is also
an excellent way for sports teams of developing nations to fund their campaigns. For instance
, without sponsorship, This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
sendMoreover
, sponsorship also
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sportspersonsclearly
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seenThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleOn the downside, when a wrong company associates itself with a major sporting event, it can tarnish the
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, sponsorships can sometimes lead to unethical practices like match-fixing. In other words
, when large companies sponsor teams, they will want their team to win at any cost, and for this purpose, they might even This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
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, it hurts the reputation of the company. Lastly
, Sponsorship money may also
cause players to lose focus on the game.To conclude
, when companies sponsor sports events or teams, both of them benefit. Businesses This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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good6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement