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plentyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
preventedpersonally
, I believe that the measures could be done
to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduceefficiently
.On the one hand,
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someThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
beginThis words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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shouldAs a result
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someIn addition
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someThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makealso
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educationbe provided
in prison, prisoners are more likely to secure employment when they go back to society, this measure could lead them to the correct path. Moreover
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shouldThis words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importantThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :aidassistsupport
helpThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyPossible spelling mistake found.misbehavior
misbehaviorsare exposed
to improper information, their moral awareness could This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
preventThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduceOn the other hand
, even though
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by the This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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decrease the desire of people to commit a violation. Firstly
, the main reason for this is that This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot ofThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
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skilled policemen on the streets the number of crime This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
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about this issue in the capitalist societies.In conclusion
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gotThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
usedThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stopThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
governmentThis words can be replaced with:disciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudy
educationThis words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
should6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement