The diagram illustrates the process of applying for a course in university after getting a high school degree.
obtain his degree certificate in order to apply to a college course; by completing an application form, which can to the admin department and wait for their response. Unfortunately, if the application the process again.
Overall
, it portrays the procedure of a high school graduate who wants to enroll for a university course, which has seven steps without any further requirements or rejection.Firstly
, the high school student This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
mustmoreover
, it can be applied
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlybe downloaded
from the university's official website. Later, it should be This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmited
sentis rejected
, cancel the application or seek an alternative course and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :embark on the proccess of
startSecondly
, after waiting for two weeks, the admin would send a reply if they need any further documents along with a provisional acceptance letter. Accordingly
, compile all the documents and send them again to the administrative department.Lastly
, if all the documents are correct, then they would send acceptance complete enrollment. Further, they give an option to select the subjects and register with the dean; finally
, high school graduates can enter the university after completing all the processes.
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5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
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