write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem.

Write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem.


Write a letter to a magazine about your neighbourhood problem.
Dear Sir. I am John Simpson, a resident of New Avenue. On the behalf of my neighbors, I am writing to express our dissatisfaction with building another mall in our territory. Our concern is about construction of new shopping mall in our area.
However
, it has already congested with parks, a supermarket and a library as we are
also
suffering from noisy and polluted atmosphere. We would suggest building it in City Mann as they have no supermarket. They would be
extremely
pleased
with this suggestion, I believe. I am writing to require a support from your esteemed daily as we can
easily
inform the problem to
government
with your aid. Hoping your prompt consideration of this urgent request. Yours
faithfully
.

6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
6
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
IELTS Writing Evaluation

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