Dear Sir,
I am, a participant in the effective recruitment management, organized by your university. I am writing to complain about inconvenience of my accommodation which
joining the course, I requested for the single bed room and close to the university. unfortunately, I was a shared bed room and there is no space for two , sunlight and fresh air rarely and I did not find it healthy surroundings.
The problem is my has frequent visitors and they stay overnight, this is tight with two bed, two study table and two , this the room suffocating and this is not airy at all. room doesn’t support a healthy environment.
I I was getting a single room, with fresh air and sunlight I can study in a healthy environment and concentrate well. I suppose my room from the university I can more time for my studies.
look forward to getting your support on this matter.
Yours
.
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