write a letter to the course provider.

Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, • say what the problem is • describe the accommodation you thought you were getting • ask the provider to solve the problem


Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, • say what the problem is • describe the accommodation you thought you were getting • ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,

I am
Neesa
, a participant in the effective recruitment management, organized by your university. I am writing to complain about inconvenience of my accommodation which
is provided
by the university for duration of my course.

Before
joining the course, I requested for the single bed room and close to the university.
But
unfortunately, I was
given
a shared bed room and there is no
enough
space for two
people
, sunlight and fresh air
comes
rarely and I did not find it healthy surroundings.

The problem is my
room mate
has frequent visitors and
sometimes
they stay overnight, this is
really
difficult to manage, and it effects my study and privacy
also
and this is on 35 minutes distance from university. The room is
very
tight with two bed, two study table and two
Almira
, this
makes
the room
very
suffocating and this is not airy at all.
The
room doesn’t support a healthy environment.

I
thought
I was getting a single room, with fresh air and sunlight
so
I can study in a healthy environment and concentrate well. I suppose my room
near by
from the university
so
I can
get
some
more time for my studies.

I
look forward to getting your support on this matter.

Yours
faithfully


Neesa
.

5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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