The pie charts illustrate about the proportion of boy and girls’ cultural and leisure activities.
that Computer games are the most popular activities among boys, while girls prefer to more than other activities.
The highest number of Boys’ cultural and Leisure activities male, with 11% and 10%,
It is noticeable that Dancing is the largest occupation in girls’ terms, with 27%. Reading is in the second proportion, accounting for 21%, while boys prefer reading 2 %, as the least occupation. addition, from reading, followed by computer games, netball and Gymnastics netball, with the ratio 16%, 15% and 11%,
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by computer games with 34%, followed by Basketball and Soccer, with the figure being 26%. And 17%, respectively
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, Skateboarding and listening to music are also
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. Listening to music is the least occupation of girls’ activities, with 10%, which has the same ratio as boys.
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Total Band
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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