Unemployment is on the rise. In fact, even finding it difficult to a job. There are several reasons for this unfortunate development.
The ongoing economic crisis is one of the main reasons for unemployment. The recession has forced organizations to stop hiring new people.
At the same time, there is an increase in the number of people graduating from universities. This is afford a university education. its rapid economic growth, the country jobs for all of its people. Another reason that leads to unemployment in developed nations is the outsourcing of jobs to developing nations where is available.
Unemployment is likely to be a cause for concern in the coming years too. In my opinion, young graduates stop waiting for job offers from Fortune 500 . find jobs themselves. The internet has actually made this easier. It people to sell their products or services to interested parties all over the world. stop their obsession with white-collar jobs. If they do not mind sweating it out, jobs are
the increase in the number of graduates and the decrease in economic growth. The way to solve this problem is to encourage people to find employment themselves. This might require them to take up manual jobs, having a job is way better than having none at all.
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