the chart below shows the places visited by different people living in canada.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.


The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
The bar graph illustrates information about those various societies;
people
who had
different
native language, English speakers and Canadian born and those liked to visit in distinct areas which included cinema, theater, library and zoo. In
details
, the cinema is the most popular placed that
was visited
by Canadian Nationality holder that was70% while, migrants with English speakers is least by 5% as compared to without Migrants
people
. Others native speakers those had least interested to went cinema almost 20% dipped
in contrast
to without migrants humans and others native speakers who were living in Canada, they had to gone in library
that is
55%
but
there was
significantly
changed
in ratio of
canadian
born that was less than 40% and at the time the percentage of migrants persons exact 40%These three societies had minimum interest to went to
theatre
as compare to others places and 50% English native speakers had interested to went zoo
however
others had not liked to went too much.
Overall
, what stand out from the diagram is

6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement
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