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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work.

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there
A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Abhishek, I felt
really
happy after reading your letter that you are moving to Punjab.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you are working at
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global world
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
in my city it
is located
close to
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Ranjit
Avenue. That colony is best for living as it will be within walking distance to your office.
Moreover
, grocery stores will
also
be nearby.

If you
Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)need
will need
to
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
transport then there are auto-rickshaw, bus stand, and railway station. If you will
This words can be replaced with:ought to
have to
go somewhere urgent you can call us
as well
, we are living on back side of
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Ranjit
Avenue.
Furthermore
, when you will
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :embark on the proccess of
start
going to job there you can
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
new friends and go for shopping and fun time.
Next
month is my birthday party. I am going to through party and then you will
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
chance to
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
my friends.

Waiting to
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
you
This words can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best Regards,

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Amanbir
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Kaur
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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