The pie chart and table is representing the final ratio of fish transported to America from 1988 to 2000.
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of fish imported to the US. In 1998 Canada did sand 60% of its fish to America and after four years it declined about thirty-four per cent difference it was not four per centum. The fish imported ratio from in 1992 was 20% and it rose in 2000 ten per cent.
North America is a county, easy than others.
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, Canada and other transport more fish to America, This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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very5.5
Total Band
5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement