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To initiate the advantages how planting trees is helpful in towns and cities. The people living in cities and towns are likely to stay healthy; on their physical health, they may not face dire consequences, such as skin cancer, asthma, redness, and water issues in the eyes, might
Despite the benefits of planting trees, giving priority to building the houses has pros too. The primary one is to the of congestion that cannot , people who are living in the countryside having not any source of earning migrate to the cities and towns for earning bread and butter. Apart from this, the population, having taken considerable increase, solve the problem of living for the future. To cite an example, the metropolitan cities of India, such as Delhi and Bombay, which are
of solving the issue of the crowd.
generally
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eco-systemrather
plant them in the wide areas of towns and urban areas as well
than constructing the maximum houses. In my opinion, although there are certain benefits associated with this plantation, building houses seems to be more advantageous in this case
due to This words can be replaced with:a number of
someTo initiate the advantages how planting trees is helpful in towns and cities. The
first
and foremost benefit is to absorb the pollution and generate oxygen, not possible without the presence of trees. To elaborate, the level of various kinds of gases, like carbon- dioxide, carbon monoxide, and methane, generated by the growing number of industries, electrical appliances, even vehicles also
, can be largely
absorbed by the trees and transferred into the form of oxygen. As a consequence, Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number ofThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have tobe associated
with the high level of pollution.Despite the benefits of planting trees, giving priority to building the houses has pros too. The primary one is to
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riskbe solved
without housing. To This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explainespecially
in cities, require more space for accommodation; hence
, the construction of houses is a After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.musthave to
must togenerally
considered to have the highest population throughout the country, always have the maximum construction of houses each year.In conclusion
, according to my perspective, though the absorption of pollution and the generation of oxygen is the major benefit of planting trees in cities and towns, the construction of houses seems to have more benefits This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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