some people work for the same organisation all their working life.

 Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.
Some
members of society believe that individuals should perform in one company during their whole life.
However
, others say that it is beneficial for jobholders to participate in various industries. This essay intends to discuss to the both points along with relevant examples in the upcoming paragraphs
before
reaching at the conclusion.

On the one hand, there are certain merits to workers, if they work in same
organisation
in their all working life.
Firstly
, employees can become professional in a particular field through working for long time in a company,
because
they will give efforts for improving their work skills, then they can not
only
get
sufficient salary,
but
also
get
chance for special offers with
help
of their better performance in the working field.
For example
, a person, who is expert
as well
as
old
member of a firm,
so
he can
get
chance of tour in abroad
countires
by his company. The another advantage of working in same industry is promotions, as workers can
get
promotion
easily
in their jobs, when they have more experience and connect with a company from long time.
Hence
, jobholders can receive promotion and earn profit without changing
organisation
in their life.

On the other hand
, if
people
work under
different
companies during changing time period in their life, then they can
improve
their versatile skills such as communication and
socialise
skills, since employees
meet
with various new workers, when they participate in
diffierent
industries.
As a result
, their bonding level and communication skill will
developed
by talking with numerous
people
in the
mant
companies.
In addition
, everyone can become multi-task worker with attending to
many
jobs.
For instance
, a worker will perform in
many
jobs during participating in several industries,
so
they can learn new skills with
help
of it.

To conclude
, I opine that although, employees can
get
more than one experiences with performing in various
organisations
,
but
it is not fruitful for them,
because
they can not become expert in a particular field.
Moreover
, they can not earn profit
as well
as certain offers from their companies such as tour of international countries and holiday package.

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Total Band
6.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
IELTS Writing Evaluation

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