It is argued that it is more that job satisfaction is much more than salary. , you are dull all day. Maybe, you are and you will lose happiness if you like your profession you will always bring pleasure and sense of fulfillment. your job you study children well and you comprehend them great. you hate this occupation you can't teach them . Maybe, you are and you shout them and you don't understand them you motivated and fulfilled their job, their aim you may take a high salary. and this
a high as salary it happy and motivated
This words can be replaced with:frequently
oftenadvantageously
to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
thinkThis words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importantFirstly
, if you don't like your job This words can be replaced with:sufficient
enoughThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stressoverall
from your This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
livesThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butFor instance
, if you are teacher and you This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
loveThis words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
IfThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
goodThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stressSecondly
, following your interests can This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keeptherefore
leads to career growth. It is the fact that if This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleis become
more and more professional day by day and your profession's effect is increase. Plus, if you work This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardFor example
, you work at the factory as worker and you prefer this job to others and you work in heart and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardis caused
by grow your wage.In conclusion
, I strongly
believe that job satisfaction is more adventurous Did you mean "than"?than
thenThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makesThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement