Everyone will have their personal life in which others should not be . Nowadays media is crossing its limits in the of famous people and place them into the public. In any country each person will have right lead his personal life which is no need to expose to everyone.
Everyone will struggles while raising in his/her career. Once they fame the media will focus on every inch of their life and trying to project them to public or social media.
Media should judge weather the thing is bare it or not. For their TRP rating expose all the famous people life is not right.
We give privacy for them and for their life. To know how he gain that famous will be useful to take it as a challenge in raising everyone life is a good thing making key hole journalism is not a good way for any person.
In days one king to raise a war on other kingdoms for the fame and crown of that kingdom, there is purpose there. invasion on the famous people life is not the right way.
There are where media are going to cross limits by asking them how they are felling in that situation. daughter was away with a person and married him is not a good way of treating the .
On my point of view media treating famous people
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interfereThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
livesPossible typo: you repeated a wordto
to toEveryone will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "have"have
hadThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
gotMedia should judge weather the thing is
really
harmful to anybody or not or any of their family member Please check whether one of these words is redundant.can
can able toWe
This words can be replaced with:ought to
have toThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butIn
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oldThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
usedThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
ButThere are
This words can be replaced with:a number of
somePossible agreement error. Did you mean "situations"?situations
situationPossible spelling mistake found.theirheartierThaithiefshear
thierFor example
a famous Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "actors'" or "actor's"?actors'actor's
actorsConsider using a past participle here: "run".run
ranprivately
, at that time media asks her parents how they are reacting in that situation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhich
whichThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleOn my point of view media treating famous people
unfairly
which is not the right way of doing.
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement