Dear sir or madam,
I am , and I in room number 13B of the college hostel. I am writing this letter to request you to my existing accommodation facility.
am sharing room 13B with Sam Sebastian from the Electrical engineering department of our college. Regular smoker, and to this room. Salt coma recently detected work long infection which took me a while to recover my doctor has advised me to maintain distance from smokers as my condition can deteriorate if not been careful.
I would like to request you to shift me to a new room and
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