Dear Diana,
I’m writing to for damaging the laptop which I borrowed from you last week.
To be honest, I can not defend my actions and have been vital
What happened is that I was working on it while my baby interrupted me the truth, I should be
it to as new when I it back ,
Again, I’m sorry for the. I hope you will accept my apologies and forgive me.
Best wishes,
Jane Eyre.
I’m writing to
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consequently
guilty that causes of my carelessness. I know that tool is how not This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
essential to you as a gift of your father.What happened is that I was working on it while my baby interrupted me
as a result
it fell down and the screen has broken. To This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tellextremely
careful about it due to the fact of your belong.However
, I have immediately This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmited
sentbe repaired
. It would be as This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
goodThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getnext
week. Anyway, the laptop would be completely This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixedotherwise
I will refund to you the damaged amount of it.Again, I’m sorry for the
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
eventBest wishes,
Jane Eyre.
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Total Band
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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