people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.

People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.


People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.
Apparently
, crime always remained a hot topic in society since when people went against low.
Some
critics
reckpn
that sentencing longer may punish
relevantly
whilst others claim there are another methods which can us
used
opposite offenders such educating or giving second chance,
personally
, I will stick to the second view.

Without a doubt person who committed a crime
must
be punished
as a
rule
in this case
government tend to
make
it harder to sentence for longer by this way offender will repent
own
fault.
Also
, mild punishment
frequently
doesn't
make
people to be
changed
and not commit second time
as a result
severe penalty appeared
because
of criminals behavior.
For example
, the death penalty emerged in
china
as consequence it wiped out corruption and future crimes, even someone broke the law he will
be sentenced
for
many
years according to tough restrictions China skyrocketed in
economical
power.

On the other hand
,
plenty
of people want alternative solutions to exist or else explore another method that can forgive offenders and
stop
criming
. In my, there
must educational
lessons where should
be taught
during college or University letting them know what is crime and future consequences not
only
for individuals
but
also
influence parents, friends. Though, this action causes disagreement
but
we
are supposed
to be on the human side by forgiving them depending on the level of crime this measure would be reasonable and wise.
Likewise
, keeping prisoners cost high expenses which
allow
the court to
think
profoundly
before
sentence human for
longe
years. Plus, hefty fines
are considered
one of the best solutions ever.
Firstly
, it can bring profits in favor of government,
secondly
from the degree of crime one could
be forgiven
to the fine.
For example
, our government freed up
some
people committed crime.

In a nutshell, there are several ways of increasing crimes
mainly
all of them appears well in certain cases somehow my opinion is giving hefty fines or forgive people depending on circumstances.

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