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, crime always remained a hot topic in society since when people went against low. This words can be replaced with:a number of
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reckpnrelevantly
whilst others claim there are another methods which can us This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
usedpersonally
, I will stick to the second view.Without a doubt person who committed a crime
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
mustbe punished
as a This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rulein this case
government tend to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownAlso
, mild punishment frequently
doesn't This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifiedaltered
changedas a result
severe penalty appeared This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseFor example
, the death penalty emerged in Capitalize this word if you mean the country, not white porcelain.China
chinabe sentenced
for This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyDid you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?economic
economicalOn the other hand
, This words can be replaced with:abundance
plentyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
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must educationalbe taught
during college or University letting them know what is crime and future consequences not This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
influence parents, friends. Though, this action causes disagreement This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butare supposed
to be on the human side by forgiving them depending on the level of crime this measure would be reasonable and wise. Likewise
, keeping prisoners cost high expenses which This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allowThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
thinkprofoundly
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longeare considered
one of the best solutions ever. Firstly
, it can bring profits in favor of government, secondly
from the degree of crime one could be forgiven
to the fine. For example
, our government freed up This words can be replaced with:a number of
someIn a nutshell, there are several ways of increasing crimes
mainly
all of them appears well in certain cases somehow my opinion is giving hefty fines or forgive people depending on circumstances.
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement