The gun ownership of policemen is a controversial problem among community people argue that it may lead to the increase of violence in the society. I that police should
Police officers carrying guns and walking around are less likely to encourage the level of violent crimes. To with, Police officers are responsible for deterring () the latent (potential) criminals and taking care of all the citizens’ safety, which could be people may intend to commit a crime, there is a higher possibility for them to quit taking action if they are aware of the serious consequence of meeting gun-carrying police. In this regard the level of violent crimes tends to descend, and
them to safeguard themselves. There is an alarming increase in gun ownership which would increase the potential to police officers of being the victims of gun crime.
to the policemen for specific situations and the policemen take responsibility for this property.
of gun of the police to ensure the social security and defend all the citizens and themselves against the culprits.
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, the violence is not likely to occur when the police force follow the regulations of gun utilization.In conclusion
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