Dear John
I am writing in reply to your letter asking for advice about managing the time
To with, you could not distribute the time for your preparation. I would suggest that to a schedule which controls the time all day. If you follow it not you to do every thing on time to work it.
Your how to cope with both study and doing household chores at home. I your family members in order to support you.
As you said it would be great if you can relieve the anxiety exam. In my view . to speak in front of mirror.
I trust you will accept my advice. me know what happens and achieve the best result in your exams.
Yours
Jane Eyre.
I am writing in reply to your letter asking for advice about managing the time
efficiently
while preparing for exams.To
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recommend that you should be able to do both of them in time not late. Why don’t you read or listen exam materials during housework? Furthermore
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practisingI trust you will accept my advice.
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sincerely
,Jane Eyre.
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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Task Achievement