Dear Sir,
I am Elaine and I have been working in this for 8 years. I am requesting you to me in the language training course which is .
of my achievements I have a times and working as Senior manager. which under me of it I do lots of work.
My prime work is to about the new case study to the groups along with the side effects and of every drug. us then I a meeting with them. .
As I will be able to learn French and German then it would be for us to deal with the Germany .
Yours
Elaine
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, after completing the training every person will have a certificate which will be useful for future.Yours
faithfully
Elaine
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