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positiveThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
bigThis words can be replaced with:various
differenttotally
have no place in delight.In this modern competitive era, finance should
be consumed
in a plethora of right ways for good reasons. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of allHonestly
, using finance for This words can be replaced with:abundance
plentyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
have a tremendous The usual preposition for "contribution" is "to". Did you mean "contribution to"?contribution to
contribution onNext
, in This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
currentThis words can be replaced with:frequently
oftenThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyis believed
to become worse in next
decades. However
, this issue will be solved
quickly
if the citizens frequently
donate money on available charity organizations in order to support people in difficult circumstances and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :aidassistsupport
helpApart from the currency, there are several things that can
massively
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveFirst
, good relationships with family and friends can bring This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyPossible spelling mistake found.empathizes
empathiesThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistsassistances
helpsThis words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
addedThis words can be replaced with:frequently
oftenThis words can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
bigThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skillsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stressThis words can be replaced with:therefore
SoThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clearalso
considered as a This words can be replaced with:beneficial
positiveIn conclusion
, I believe that the development of education and donation for the poverty are the good This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
usesMoreover
, happiness and close relationships friends are This words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement