Felony is on the rise these days, and it is having an should the rising violation in the youth. Although, I and believe that , and to eliminate the effects of the violation.
To with, it is apparent that the knowledge of good parenting is a way to take care of a young person who have the knowledge and ability to take good care of their offspring are well conscious of the importance and benefits of a crime-free atmosphere, inspire their youngster to follow the path of goodness. their juvenile informed of the crimes crime reality that the youngster can themselves away from the path of crime as much as possible.
prepare them free of ill mentality. needs to prepare the growing youth aware of the ill effects of a . They should prepare the juniors aware of teaching against felony have a thorough knowledge of the severe punishments for committing an and .
about the consequences of doing things and their disastrous results as it is to
extremely
adverse effect on humanity. It is argued
that This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peoplebe endowed
with good parenting education, which is the best way to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stopThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreefurther
steps can be taken
to bring about good This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeTo
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beginThis words can be replaced with:beneficial
positiveThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownFor example
, parents This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
mustThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makebeing committed
consequently
, they need to address the youth to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watchThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
showsThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keepSubsequently
, teachers have a responsibility to teach their scholars to avoid misdeed. Educators and mentors need to teach the juveniles to walk the good path, as well
as inspire them to be good personality. Student counselling classes are a After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.musthave to
must toBesides
, the This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
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misdemeanourconsequently
, one This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
mustPossible spelling mistake. 'offence' is British English.offense
offencebe made
conscious of the ill effects of committing a violation. For example
, youngsters ought to be mindful of the strict laws against various criminal Possible spelling mistake. 'offences' is British English.offenses
offencesIn conclusion
, I would like to extract this summary that it is merely
as essential to educating a This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenagerThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
badThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
thinkpositively
about good parenting.
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Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement