Dear Mechanic Simpson. I am , a resident of district. I am a loyal client of your car repairing service. am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with your service which I had my car repaired with the of you last week. it as you said it was in condition, I gave you huge charge for your service. annoyed with that situation as I did not know what to do and I had to push it to near car repairing service. The mechanic repaired my car in 2 hours and I had to a charge for that. I am writing to require you a full refund as I had to paid double charge for it. I believe you will understand me as I am a loyal client of your service. Hope your consideration regarding this matter. Yours
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