This words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask forThis words can be replaced with:adverse
negativeoverly
relaxed approach to parenting, called permissive parenting, has no regulations or This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rulesdreadfully
and is inferior compared to authoritative parenting. The latter is the best method of raising children, in my opinion, This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseas well
as have realistic expectations of their children. They tend to utilize This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fairThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
badThis words can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
beforeMoreover
, authoritative parents are role models for their children, owing to their nurturing and disciplined personality. Thus
, their children will grow up into self-disciplined and motivated young adults who are able to achieve enormous success. In contrast
, indulgent parenting has long-term This words can be replaced with:adverse
negativeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
livesfirst
and most harmful outcome is that children will develop impaired emotional understanding and may even have This words can be replaced with:tiny
littleThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleacademically
motivated. Moreover
, due to limited guidance from their parents in their childhood, these young adults will struggle with self-regulation and be unable to deal with emotionally
difficult situations. In conclusion
, children need to be taught
to be independent and self-disciplined while permissive parenting brings about undesirable outcomes.
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Task Achievement