some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever

Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older


Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older
It is quite common for
some
parents to provide their children with everything they
ask for
and to give them too much freedom. From my point of view, this style of parenting is not the right way to bring up children, and it may lead to
negative
outcomes. This
overly
relaxed approach to parenting, called permissive parenting, has no regulations or
rules
, spoils children
dreadfully
and is inferior compared to authoritative parenting. The latter is the best method of raising children, in my opinion,
because
authoritative parents are reasonable and responsible
as well
as have realistic expectations of their children. They tend to utilize
fair
discipline, which means rewarding when children obey and explaining their
bad
behaviors
before
punishing them.
Moreover
, authoritative parents are role models for their children, owing to their nurturing and disciplined personality.
Thus
, their children will grow up into self-disciplined and motivated young adults who are able to achieve enormous success.
In contrast
, indulgent parenting has long-term
negative
consequences on children's personalities and their
lives
. The
first
and most harmful outcome is that children will develop impaired emotional understanding and may even have
little
sympathy for
people
around them, which leads to their inability to work in groups and form long-lasting friendships. Their demanding and impatient personality, caused by the indulgent method of parenting, will result in laziness, dependence on their family and in their not being
academically
motivated.
Moreover
, due to limited guidance from their parents in their childhood, these young adults will struggle with self-regulation and be unable to deal with
emotionally
difficult situations.
In conclusion
, children need to
be taught
to be independent and self-disciplined while permissive parenting brings about undesirable outcomes.

6
Total Band
5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
IELTS Writing Evaluation

the government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little you recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly. some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. some people believe that advertisements targeting children may have negative effects on them you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. hi emma, i'm writing to let you know about my career progression and the job change that i underwent some people are afraid to leave the house because of crime. the diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.