Funding the subject of science for the development of the nation. believe that science plays an role in the progression of countries future, that along with science other subjects are the science subjects, they play a vital role in the development of the future generation. sort of diseases, it is mandatory to gain proper knowledge in these subjects.
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more beneficial than other subjects like history, geography and mathematics by This words can be replaced with:a number of
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, science is mandatory for white collar jobs such as doctor, engineers and nurses, without science topics like medicine, physiology, biology doctors will not be able to treat patients with This words can be replaced with:various
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, science subjects provides the base to the next
generations to choose their career accordingly
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Total Band
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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Task Achievement