There is an opinion that the mass media have a significant influence on people’s viewpoint and it is unlikely that this situation can be . I disagree with this statement. at all times, the media have had a great impact on the mass consciousness. In 21st century there are types of mass media that people face every day. In my essay will present my viewpoint on this problem.
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people, mentally ill people who can trust any that they . The media takes an advantage of such people. It is easy to control them.
As for me, I tend to believe that the fact mass media play vital role in everyday life it cannot that’s why the monitor all mass media and censor indecent information.
and their attitudes. My viewpoint
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