The pie chart represents the proportion of exports from EU nations to India and China in the years 2000 and 2011.
During 2000 in India, United Kingdom has the largest proportion of exports to India around 29 percent whereas in 2011 Germany has exported major chunk of goods to India around 25 percent. Both the years Austria’s exports were the lowest Although In China both the years Germany has the highest proportion of Exports. With the figure increasing by 10 percent in the year 2011. In 2000 the lowest proportion of exports were Austria and Spain both exporting around 2 percent of the goods to China country with the lowest exports.
proportion of goods to both India and China while Austria exports the lowest.
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differentDuring 2000 in India, United Kingdom has the largest proportion of exports to India around 29 percent whereas in 2011 Germany has exported major chunk of goods to India around 25 percent. Both the years Austria’s exports were the lowest Although In China both the years Germany has the highest proportion of Exports. With the figure increasing by 10 percent in the year 2011. In 2000 the lowest proportion of exports were Austria and Spain both exporting around 2 percent of the goods to China
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in 2011 Austria was the This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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