University education plays a vital role in career. learners are taking university education as a comparison to . A segment of society believes that university ought to accept both boys and girls have the same educational opportunities. with the of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work to achieve grades at school. If a female is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is to reject her in of a male with lower grades or fewer qualifications.
to a selection procedure based on gender.
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