This words can be replaced with:frequently
Oftenstill
developing. Means a larger part of the population still
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liveThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soIncome from the tourism can be
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
usedThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :aidassistsupport
helpFirst
, Income can directly
shared by employing poor people into the tourism industry. This means that the income Possible spelling mistake found.thattheirtheythanThaihay
thayFor example
, installed the health care camp, food This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fairDid you mean "these"?these
thisThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleHowever
, As the Possible spelling mistake found.profitprofileprofitsprofitedprof iteprofit e
profiteThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soIn addition
, it could be Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
anIn conclusion
, Engaging the local people, particularly
those from the poor background, can be Consider using the past participle "decimated"?decimated
decimatealso
advantageous to poor people. Same time assist in the preservation of traditional culture, with sensible approach these problems can be easily
removed.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement