The plans illustrate the development of a health from 2005 to the present day. that major have .
, the room which remained unchanged in health since 2005 is physiotherapy room. There is an extra minor operations room being compared to that in the year 2005 which had 3 rooms. The main entrance is, corner of the health with additional children's play area. The reception desk is placed near the entrance which is opposite of children's play area.
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centreOverall
, it is This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clearThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifiesalters
changesbeen taken
place to the health Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of allThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
addednext
to it, thus
the size of the garden has decreased. In the present day, there are more seats available to the patients than that in 2005. In addition
, there are 4 consulting rooms This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
nowThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlynoticeably
, shifted to the bottom This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
leftPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement