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we still
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makeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
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causing biosphere to lose its habitants, nevertheless
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bigThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
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of renewable solar energy and wind power, in order to claim more financial benefit and overpower their rivals, which leads the countries into wars.Secondly
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Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement