plan a & b shows a health centre in 2005 and in present day

Plan A & B shows a health centre in 2005 and in present day


Plan A & B shows a health centre in 2005 and in present day
The illustration compares that arrangement of the health
centre
's rooms and facilities in 2005 and in the present day. It can
be observed
that the health
centre
has
been renovated
and it has more rooms and less space for the garden these days compared to that of 2005.

According to plan A, in 2005, the health
centre
's car park could cater
only
twelve motor vehicles. From the entrance of the building, the reception desk was at the
centreof
the building and that
was surrounded
by three consultation rooms and the office. There are seats for
people
at the
left
side of the entrance in the reception room. The hospital
also
had a physiotherapy room which
was located
behind the second consulting room.
Moreover
, the garden outside the building was quite wide and surrounded the health center.

The renovation took place in the hospital and
now
a days there are additional facilities in the health center such as an operating room for minor procedures and a place for children's recreation.
Now
the parking area can accommodate thirty cars and wider compared to their car park area in the year 2005. It can
also
be observed
that a number of
changes
were made
in the reception room.
Moreover
, its entrance
is relocated
at the
left
-side of the building
as well
as its reception desk which is a few steps away from their entrance door. A new consultancy room was
added
and
today
, the health center can perform minor operations as they have a dedicated operation room adjacent to the office and
merely
beside the physiotherapy room.

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